Changes made//Difficulties we are facing

We have come along way since the beginning of our project and a lot of changes have been made from our old ideas. Initially, we begun with an interview with the prime minister and after that went on to a montage of the protagonist's house and alcohol bottles and empty pill bottles to connote his insanity and mental unstability. However we then got some constructive criticism and realised that if someone was planning to murder the prime minister they would carefully plan it out and would be very neat and organised rather than messy and unstable. A lot of development has been made between then and now and we are just editing the last bits and adding in the titles.

As a group we realised that we have become so focused on editing and trying to make the storyline clear that we haven't included anything thrilling. This worried us a lot as we are running out of time so we have had to think about a few extra shots we can intercut into our opening.

The shots:

• An over the shoulder shot of the protagonist scrolling through the web with searches such as 'how to make a c4 bomb'
• A close up of the protagonist pulling his tie tight- connote anger
• A shot of him on the phone to someone "I've got the bomb, i'll be at the houses of parliament at 9 tonight"
• A close up of a picture of the prime minister

Moreover we have finally thought of a title for our film- 'Vengeance' we have chosen this because the term refers to punishment inflicted because of a wrong doing, in our case, the protagonist wants to punish the prime minster for the economical crisis and the current state the country is in.